31/10/2017

Ballads of War 2x24-2x25

I've been neglecting the comic issues these days, but here I am again. Let's get back to Brent and El'Kais...


A transition scene more than any other thing. A little character building, but mostly a reminder of time, so the overall sense of action in the big picture makes sense. Maybe I should have used more pages and time on the Brent-El'Kais relationship and the motivation of the Tau, but the script and panel allocation called for this kind of path if I wanted to get anywhere with the story; so I thought I should at least tell something about the Tau people but without making the story dull with neverending texts.

The story moves on, now we'll be focusing back on the main characters for the next pages (in fact until we reach the end of what I've got! But that may be some kind of spoiler, so I won't tell anything more for now)

You know, HERE you can read how we got to this point...
More pages soon, promise :)

6 comments:

  1. Great! thanks for next story pages :)

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    1. Thank you! I still have a few more pages :)

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  2. fuck, mira que poder hacerle eso a un Orco... ya hay que estar fuerte! jajaja
    genial :)

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    1. ¡Jaja! Prometo que habrá una respuesta para eso antes de llegar al final de lo que tengo dibujado...

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  3. The dialogue in this week's panels is so good. And very funny too. Although not a lot happens, I think this is one of my favourite parts of the whole comic so far -- great pacing, great comic timing, great character development.

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    1. Thank you very much! These parts are always challenging, much more than action scenes. You have to make the dialogues look natural yet bringing something to the story. I think the interaction between these two characters was necessary at this point, if we are to take this weird alliance for serious.
      I'm running out of pages to show, but I hope you like them too!

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